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Post by LightningRod on Sun 15 Feb 2009, 2:15 am

The Wheel
Strength, unity, revolutionů
Of the wheel.
A flock of minds merge,
Their forces combine,
to become recognised,
to push themselves,
from a minority
to a majority.
That is also revolution.
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Post by Jack Skellington on Sun 15 Feb 2009, 6:47 am

NOT COOL That is goooood. -applauds-
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Post by Isis on Mon 16 Feb 2009, 12:21 am

Wow. I'm still thinking it over, I'm still contemplating the meanings of it, which is always good. To make someone think through your writing is always a wonderful accomplishment. I've never connected the revolution as in rotation and the revolution as in overthrowing something until now. Very interesting.

I love your writing, by the way. To me, it's very unique to you. I don't know anyone who writes like you. It's beautiful, raw, and so very different, in a refreshing way.
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Post by belle of the boulevard. on Mon 16 Feb 2009, 1:25 am

okay so you mentioned you write poetry on msn so i had to come look, didn't i?
i really liked it. i'm not a poetry girl- ask my english teacher, who is probably scarred by the number of times i have gone I HATE POETRY and words along those lines in her lessons, but i did, honestly, really like this.
it's not complex and elaborate, but that's just refreshing, unique and makes a good read. i liked the force in the words as well. Smile
all in all, shh, you, you can write poetry.
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