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Post by --- Thu 02 Oct 2008, 9:58 pm

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Post by makoto kino. Fri 03 Oct 2008, 4:31 pm

Oh my Gosh.
That was so amazingly well written!
I love all the repetition and the short staggered sentences.
Beautiful.
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Post by ihaztinkinmyhair Mon 06 Oct 2008, 11:40 am

Wow.

I really like it.
Really really.

The repetition just added to it.
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Post by tea-boy. Mon 29 Dec 2008, 9:49 am

This is...just brilliant.
The eloquence of your poetry makes me go NOT COOL
You strung the sentences perfectly.
Again, the imagery was flawless.
This is just...perfection.
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