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Dangerous Boys With Delicate Touches

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Post by joutsenet. Sun 14 Sep 2008, 6:06 pm

This one's actually - in my opinion - one of the best things I've written.
Triggering content.


The scar along your clenched jaw,
Your words,
Running up my spine,
As the voice I've been dreading to hear,
Brushes across my lips.

Shivers.

Your cigarette-smoke breath,
It swirls against my hip,
Touch, touching
So delicate.
So dangerous.

Your calloused fingertips,
Bring them over here
And feel the sour taste
Your tongue on mine.
And I'm choking on the breath,
The words of your spilled secret

And did you hear
Me causing a scene
Under the lamppost?

And we're about to see,
You raping me with that broken...
(Oh, scratch that)

Shatter me,
Isn't it what you'd like to see?
On my knees,
Ready, unwilling and capable
Of doing such a thing?

No, you're not so confident.
joutsenet.
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Post by the way Sun 14 Sep 2008, 6:20 pm

I'd love to hear it recorded someday.
Provocative and graphic; so taboo and worldly.
Perfect.
the way
the way
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