This is a garage song

by **LADIES AND GENTLEMEN** Wed 19 Nov 2008, 5:35 pm

Written a couple of weeks ago. My band, Nitro Casino's, first song.

So here we are, back to the start again
Trying not to break
Break the glass and break your heart again
And everyone's saying
"it's too late"
For our phonecalls and our second chances
And I cant wait
Here for you anymore

We've got one last chance
One last chance tonight
One more time
Dont make this the end
One more try
Come on, please don't cry
And I will give it all I've got cause I
Don't wanna give up on you

I'm running circles with my eyes shut
But dont try and lead the way
Give me some time to chew this over
Cause I'm not making promises
Kisses goodbye have never been sweeter
Kises hello have never hurt more
Pick a card, any card
And hope it's not a joker this time

We've got one last chance
One last chance tonight
One more time
Dont make this the end
One more try
Come on, please don't cry
And I will give it all I've got cause I
Don't wanna give up on you

We've got one last chance
One last chance tonight
One more time
Dont make this the end
One more try
Come on, please don't cry
And I will give it all I've got cause I
Don't wanna give up on you

by the way Wed 19 Nov 2008, 7:47 pm

So many brilliant lines, but this:

Pick a card, any card
And hope it's not a joker this time

is SUPERB.
I wanna hear the tune to this!!!
MIKEEEY YOU PWN US AT BEING A LYRICIST
I CAN ALMOST SAY I HATE YOU BUT I DONT
T_T
GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
SING THIS TO MY EX, WILL YA?

by lyrical_mess Wed 19 Nov 2008, 8:25 pm

The tune is pwnful fer srs.

And also, can you try and record a better sound quality of it? Because on youtube, it sounds really white-noise-y. Especially the first verse and first half of the first chorus.

by Adrisole Q. Kazoo Thu 20 Nov 2008, 6:53 am

by **LADIES AND GENTLEMEN** Thu 20 Nov 2008, 1:56 pm

Thankyoouu <3

I was actually a bit hesitant about posting this, because its more... to the point, I guess, than most of the stuff I write. Not as eloquent. But I'm really glad you guys like it
iay ;_;

I linked a better version on the You thread in atrists, if you wanted to hear it

by P R I N C E S S Sat 29 Nov 2008, 4:03 pm

Damn you Isa you picked out the line I was going to pick out, that line is brilliant Mikey. Instead I will point out this line 'dont try and lead the way' I realy like it.

I'm terrible at writing lyrics so I really admire those who can do it well. As I believe you can. Smile

by we are invincible. Thu 04 Dec 2008, 12:19 pm

wow. That first verse is like, -cumslut-

by Riddled Wishes Tue 03 Feb 2009, 5:10 am

Wow its brilliant. It can speak to so many people and each are relating to their own issues.
I adore it. Off to find that youtube video you said you posted to hear it cuz i bet it sounds just as wonderful if not better than written ^.^

Oh! and personally i love the joker line and "I'm running circles with my eyes shut" its powerful and describes so much

by **LADIES AND GENTLEMEN** Tue 03 Feb 2009, 5:43 pm

Thankyou

The recording is really quite terrible, there's a better version on our myspace.

by Who we are. Tue 10 Mar 2009, 5:57 pm

testosterone boy wrote:there's a better version on our myspace.

Its not working. Just so you know. I dont know how to fix.

by **LADIES AND GENTLEMEN** Tue 10 Mar 2009, 6:05 pm

It's working for me D:

Oh, and I have to mention;

When sung this has to be pronounced
One last chance (Australianly)
One last chance (americanly) tonight

Lulz

by Who we are. Tue 10 Mar 2009, 6:08 pm

testosterone boy wrote:It's working for me D:

My computer fails.

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